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The Locked Emotion... by ~Kurokari:iconKurokari:





Locked away so long ago
An emotion so kind.
Locked away only for show.
The lock was of the mind.

The lock was tested day by day
never once did it slip.
But then one special test came my way
This test made the lock tip.

This test was different.
The lock stood no chance.
The cage had been bent.
The emotion was free to advance.

Now it is clear that this fine emotion
Should flow free in my mind like an ocean.
©2008-2009 ~Kurokari
:iconkurokari:

Author's Comments

This was originally submitted on my other account. I have decided to move it to my now main account. This poem was moved since it has such a strong message to it, I could not just leave it on my old dead account.

Here is the description from the original submission:
"Well I had an assignment in school to write a sonnet about anything. So I sat and thought about it for awhile and decided to write one about locked emotions and how no matter how hard you try to keep your emotions locked there is always something out there that will unlock it.

Well, I don't know if it's that great. I also don't think I did the proper syllables count for a sonnet... but I felt like sharing it because so far everyone I have showed it to said it was good...

Sonnet: "The Locked Emotion..." © Kurokari (me)"

Original submission date: January 19, 2007

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:icondragongirl91:
Magnificent! I <3 this poem! It is very well written and has a good message!

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:iconkurokari:
Thank you very much. :)

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"We all have dreams but some people get their dreams achieved easier then others. Never give up on your dreams for they are special and without them a person is nothing." -myself

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:icondragongirl91:
Welcome! I really enjoyed it.

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Writer and Part kitsune / star demon..

002: Who am I? That's a tough question.. (Finally got it fixed! :D )


:floating: :falling: :floating:

:star: Shadow :star:

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